Usage and MechanicsSentence ErrorsL.4.1f

Comma Splices

A comma alone can’t join two independent clauses: “It rained, we stayed inside” is a comma splice.

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A comma splice is a run-on with a comma at the border: “It rained, we stayed inside.” In Commas in Compound Sentences the comma came with a conjunction; here it is alone, and alone it can’t do the job.

Which joins work?

Key idea

A comma alone can’t join two independent clauses. Words like however, then, therefore and also are not conjunctions, so a comma before them still makes a splice.

Why it works

A comma tells the reader the sentence continues as one thought; a new subject right after it surprises them. Strunk’s fifth rule (1918) is “Do not join independent clauses by a comma.” He allowed one exception: “If the clauses are very short, and are alike in form, a comma is usually permissible,” as in “Man proposes, God disposes.” In school writing, use a stronger joint.

Worked example: Spot the splice

“The movie was long, we enjoyed it anyway.”
  1. Cover the comma. “The movie was long.” Whole. “We enjoyed it anyway.” Whole.
  2. Two independent clauses with only a comma between them: a comma splice.
  3. One fix: add a conjunction.

Answer: The movie was long, but we enjoyed it anyway.

Worked example: The however trap

“It rained, however we played outside.”
  1. However is a conjunctive adverb, not a conjunction.
  2. So the comma is still joining two independent clauses alone.
  3. Put a semicolon before however and a comma after it.

Answer: It rained; however, we played outside.

Worked example: Not a splice

“When it rained, we played inside.”
  1. “When it rained” is a dependent clause.
  2. A comma after an opening dependent clause is right.

Answer: Correct as written.

Common mistake

Joining clauses with a comma and a word like however or then: “We ate dinner, then we washed the dishes.” Fix it with and then, a semicolon, or a period.

Practice

Pass with 3 right answers, the last 2 in a row. Each right answer earns 2 XP.

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