RhetoricBuilding an ArgumentW.9-10.1b

Qualifiers and Limits

Words like usually, most and probably make a claim match its evidence.

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Toulmin’s qualifier answers the question “How sure are you?” Words like most, usually, often, probably, in many cases and for students at our school make a claim match its evidence.

Qualifying an overstated claim so it matches the evidence.

Key idea

Claim exactly as much as your evidence shows. A survey of your class supports a claim about your class; a few cases support “often” or “sometimes,” not “always.”

Why it works

An absolute claim (all, every, never, always) can be knocked down by a single counterexample. A qualified claim is harder to refute because it says only what the evidence shows. It also builds ethos: readers trust a writer who doesn’t overstate.
The qualifier fits the size of the evidence.
EvidenceOverstatedMatched
A survey of 40 students in one schoolAll teens hate early starts.Most students we surveyed want a later start.
Two cases of bikes stolen from unlocked racksEvery bike left at school will be stolen.Unlocked bikes at our school have been stolen.
Several studies of sleep and gradesSleep guarantees good grades.Students who sleep more tend to do better in school.

Worked example: Match the claim to the evidence

Evidence: “At our school, the three clubs that met at lunch lost half their members after lunch was shortened.” Which claim fits: (A) Shorter lunches destroy every club. (B) Shorter lunches may hurt clubs that meet at lunch. (C) Clubs are pointless.
  1. The evidence covers three clubs at one school.
  2. A says “every club,” far beyond the evidence. C changes the subject.
  3. B is limited to clubs that meet at lunch and says “may,” which fits a small sample.

Answer: B: it claims what three clubs at one school can show.

Common mistake

Thinking that qualifying a claim weakens it. An overstated claim is easier to knock down: one club that thrived after the change would refute “every club.” But don’t bury every sentence in hedges, either. Strunk (1918) warned against “tame, colorless, hesitating, non-committal language.” Qualify where the evidence is limited, then state the qualified claim firmly.

Practice

Pass with 3 right answers, the last 2 in a row. Each right answer earns 2 XP.

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