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A Thank-You Note

Thank the person, say what you liked about the gift or the kind thing they did, and sign your name.

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A thank-you note is a short letter that says thanks for a gift or a kindness. A good one does three things.

  • Says thank you and names the gift.
  • Tells one thing about it: how you used it, or why you like it.
  • Adds a friendly line for the person, then the closing and your name.
Leo’s thank-you note: thanks, a detail about the kite, and a personal note.

Key idea

Thank the person, name the gift, say one thing you like about it, and sign your name.

Why it works

The giver chose the gift with you in mind. When you tell them how you used it, they know it made you happy, and that is the best part of giving.

Worked example: Make it better

“Thanks for the gift. Bye.”
  1. Which gift? Name it: “Thank you for the purple mittens.”
  2. Say one thing about it: “They kept my hands warm when we went sledding.”
  3. Add a friendly line, a closing and your name.

Answer: “Thank you for the purple mittens. They kept my hands warm when we went sledding. I will wear them all winter. Love, Ava”

Common mistake

Writing only “Thanks for the gift.” without naming it or saying anything about it. Every gift is different, so the note should be too.
For the grown-up. After a birthday, write notes a few at a time, not all in one sitting. For a young writer, you can write the greeting and closing and let your child write the two middle sentences.

Practice

Pass with 3 right answers, the last 2 in a row. Each right answer earns 1 XP.

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