First WritingTelling a StoryW.2.3

A Problem and a Fix

Many stories have a problem in the middle and a fix at the end.

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Many stories have a problem in the middle: something goes wrong for the characters. Then, near the end, they find a fix, called the solution.

A problem in the middle, and a fix at the end.

Key idea

Many stories have a problem in the middle and a fix at the end.

Why it works

A problem makes the reader wonder, “What will they do?” That wondering keeps them reading. If the problem is fixed right away, there is nothing to wonder about.

Worked example: Find the problem and the fix

“Nora and her mom baked a cake. There was no sugar left. Their neighbor lent them a cup. Grandpa loved the cake.”
  1. What goes wrong? There was no sugar left. That is the problem.
  2. What do they do about it? The neighbor lends them sugar. That is the fix.

Answer: Problem: no sugar. Fix: the neighbor lends a cup.

Common mistake

Solving the problem right away, so the story has no middle. Let the characters try something, or wait a little, before the fix comes.
For the grown-up. Ask about favorite books: “What was the problem? How did they fix it?” Then help your child plan a story by choosing a problem first.

Practice

Pass with 3 right answers, the last 2 in a row. Each right answer earns 1 XP.

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