CompositionEvidence and SourcesW.6.8

Paraphrasing

A paraphrase restates one passage in your own words and your own sentence structure, about as long as the original, with a citation.

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A summary shrinks a whole source. A paraphrase restates one passage in your own words and your own sentence structure, at about the same length, so you can use its details.

Copied runs of words are marked. Judge each version.

Key idea

A fair paraphrase changes both the words and the sentence structure, keeps the meaning exactly, and cites the source. Swapping a few synonyms is not enough.

Why it works

A writer’s sentences are their work, just as the ideas are. If you keep the shape of someone’s sentence and change a few words, you are still borrowing their writing. Purdue OWL calls a paraphrase “your own rendition of essential information and ideas” expressed in a new form; writing teachers call the too-close version patchwriting.
  • Read the passage until you understand it.
  • Cover it, and write the idea as you would explain it to a friend.
  • Compare: did you keep the meaning? Did any phrase of three or more words slip in unchanged? Rewrite it, or quote it.
  • Add the citation.

Worked example: Paraphrase a sentence

Original: “Students who slept nine hours recalled more of the previous day’s lesson.” (Delgado 205)
  1. The idea: more sleep, better memory of yesterday’s lesson.
  2. New structure: start with the lesson, or with memory.
  3. Cite it.

Answer: “The longer students slept, the more they remembered of what they had learned the day before (Delgado 205).”

Common mistake

Swapping in a few synonyms but keeping the source’s sentence structure (patchwriting). That still borrows the author’s writing, and it counts as plagiarism. Check by laying your version beside the original: if the sentences line up phrase by phrase, start again from the idea, not the words.
The sources in these examples are invented for practice: the authors, titles and publishers are made up. Some phrases have no good substitute, like a name or a technical term (“chlorophyll”). Keep those; the rest should be yours.

Practice

Pass with 3 right answers, the last 2 in a row. Each right answer earns 3 XP.

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