CompositionEvidence and SourcesW.6.1b

Kinds of Evidence

Facts, statistics, examples, expert testimony and anecdotes: each kind has strengths and limits.

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In Body Paragraphs you learned that every point needs evidence. Not all evidence is the same. Each kind has strengths and limits, and a good writer chooses the kind that fits the claim.

Five kinds of evidence.
KindExampleStrengthLimit
FactThe library has 30,000 books.can be checkedmay not prove a bigger point alone
Statistic72% of surveyed students walk to school.shows how common something isdepends on who was counted and how
ExampleLast winter the north lot flooded twice.makes a point concreteone case may be unusual
Expert testimonyA pediatrician explains why teens need sleep.brings knowledge the writer lacksonly as good as the expert’s field and evidence
AnecdoteMy cousin got sick after swimming in the lake.vivid and personalone story can’t prove a general claim

Key idea

Facts, statistics, examples, expert testimony and anecdotes can all support a point. Match the evidence to the claim: a general claim (“most,” “usually,” “students”) needs evidence about many cases, not one story.

Why it works

Evidence earns a reader’s trust only if it fits what it is asked to prove. One vivid story can make a reader feel something, but it can’t show that something is common. Purdue OWL’s guide to research and evidence makes the same point: use reliable, relevant evidence, and say how it supports your claim.

Worked example: Name the kind

“According to the National Weather Service, lightning can strike more than ten miles from a storm.”
  1. It reports what an expert source says.
  2. The source is a government weather agency with the knowledge to say it.

Answer: Expert testimony (from an authoritative source).

Worked example: Does it fit the claim?

Claim: “Most students in our school want a later start time.” Evidence: “My friend Ava says she would love to sleep in.” Is that enough?
  1. The claim is about most students: a general claim.
  2. The evidence is one person’s view: an anecdote.
  3. A general claim needs evidence about many people, such as a survey of the school.

Answer: No. One anecdote can’t show what most students want.

Sort each piece of evidence by its kind.

Common mistake

Treating one story, an anecdote, as proof of a general claim. Logicians call it a hasty generalization. Check: count the cases behind your evidence. If the claim says “most” or “people,” the evidence should cover many people, not one.
Anecdotes still have a place: they make a statistic human. Pair them: “72% of surveyed students walk to school; for Sam, that walk is two miles each way.” Debaters weigh evidence the same way; see the Debate section’s chapter on research and evidence.

Practice

Pass with 3 right answers, the last 2 in a row. Each right answer earns 2 XP.

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